/story/213307/time-and-tide/issue/9
Time and Tide - "The Ole' Lowcountry South" | Penana
arrow_back
Time and Tide
more_vert
  • info_outline Info
  • toc Table of Contents
  • share Share
  • format_color_text Display Settings
  • exposure_plus_1 Recommend
  • coins Sponsor
  • report_problem Report
  • account_circle Login
share bookmark_border file_download
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Time and Tide
ISSUE #9
Author: Viktoria Fyodorova
Time and Tide
Author: Viktoria Fyodorova
ISSUE #9
"The Ole' Lowcountry South"
No Plagiarism!BYO944P8T3bHUBfzZNG6posted on PＥNAＮＡ

A salty breeze touches my lips

And says that I am here

For another week, another month

In the Ole’ Lowcountry South

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiFmtoLlyA8

I remember that tree

It’s been here since my early days

Watching me grow

Like how a parent watches their child

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEZv03ZYZhS

The sand remains the same

A soft powder between my toes

It gradually grows harder

Like a week-old snow

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXINTeKPUJP

But there’s something new

A bundle in the gully

Ripped sails and ripped ropes

This is no ordinary boat

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaa2VUyRA7D

It’s changed over time

Just like me

And now must move on

To its own kingdom and own life

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡES7QNMFvCC

Away I go

What shall I visit next?

What about the Ole’ Park de Place?

A name that’s stuck with me since youth

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8KiTfBWR5w

It’s all too clear

Flowing fountains

Bronze turtles to sit on and shipwreck playsets

I feel my excitement trembling

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqItaMb0UNC

Construction has taken a toll

My childhood’s vanished

Like the power of invisibility

Which reminds me it’s been fifteen years

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmAdnQh8nZP

But Duke’s is still here

The sap of the cold, iced tea

And the bark that we call meat

Tell me that barbecue shall never leave

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhBNtc6xaw4

The tour’s ended

Now it’s time for the biggie

My grandmother’s house

Who’s watched over it since 2008

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqReM3VGUpB

A gentle, flowery spray

That rushes through its interior

She is still here

And happy to see me

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7peYPpmCeh

We speak in my dreams

I tell her my concern

And she replies,

“The Ole’ Lowcountry South is still your amie.”

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXnbWIEpATl

She leads me to that tree

A cloud of spiritual energy

To keep me cool in the summer heat

“The tree’s grown just like you.”

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXwLgUd1wT

She wraps her pink bathrobe around me

I may not be able to see her

But she has always been true to her word

And she always comforts me in a time of peril

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrQedmMo7ws

Yes, things have changed

I saw the toll on the boat

The toll on the sand and the toll on the park

But one thing is for sure

85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbVYjPc7h9o

This is still the Ole’ Lowcountry South

216.73.217.139

ns216.73.217.139da2
Comments
BOOKMARK
+RECOMMEND
LIKES 0
READS 81
BOOKMARKS 0
campaign Request update 0
Sponsor
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to comment or bookmark!
< Prev Issue
Next Issue >
Click to load the next chapter
Be the first to like this issue!
X
X
Login first to show your name as a sponsor.

Pena Coins Credit Card

×
Time and Tide
Poetry
Adventure
Short Story
Last updated: Jun 3, 2026
Total word count: 3,470
Total reading time: 16 Minutes
adventure magic comingofage college timetravel warriors poetrycollection foundfamily animals destiny lifelessons prose nostalgia diversity collegestudents symbolism writingchallenge undiscovered schoolassingment wildcard
Report this story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.